Tempest Black Rare

Tempest Black Rare
will you rate my yugioh deck please?

Theinen the Great Sphinx
Andro Sphinx
Sphinx Teleia
Rare Metal Dragon
Peten the Dark Clown
Familiar Knight
Inferno Tempest
Return from the Different Dimension
Dark Magician Knight
Knight’s Title
Sage’s Stone
Emes the Infinity
D. D. Assailant
Twinheaded Beast
Brain Crusher
Hunter Owl
Masked Chopper
Phantom Beast Cross-Wing
Phantom Beast Wild-Horn
Phantom Beast Thunder-Pegasus
Golden Homunculus
Jinzo
Helios – The Primordial Sun
Helios Duo Megistus
3 God Cards
Black Skull Dragon
Black Luster Soldeir
Buster Blader
Dark Magician
Red Eyes B. Dragon
Blue Eyes W. Dragon (x3)
All Elemental Heroes
Polymerization
Ancient Sancurary
Rise of Destiny
Dark Hole
Flaming Eternity
Dragon Seeker
Just Desserts
Solomons Lawbook
Reverse Trap
Negate Attack
De-Spell
Wick-Breaking Flamberge-Baou
Mystic Probe
Yami
The Regulation Of Tribe
Type Zero Magic Crusher
Cold Wave

Hm… Good cards but I don’t like the deck. It seems like it is just a mix of all your powerfull cards. You only have like 17 Magic/Trap cards. I would recommend more. Also aren’t all God cards banned from tornaments? You also don’t have a lot of under 4 star monsters so you may find it harder to summone your 3 Blue eyes… And since I played yugioh when I was in Japan i’m not familiar with english names. I recommend you update your deck to fit with newer strategies. Don’t just depend on pure power to win. Also I didn’t see a Monster Reborn or Call of the Wild (if that’s it’s english name) inside. Two really helpfull cards. So if I were you I’d remove some of the ‘uber’ cards and get some strong 4 star monsters (Like that one normal monster card with atk:1900, def: 1500) and more magic/trap cards.

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